Friday, August 3, 2012

Kony 2012


Kony 2012

썸네일    Have you ever heard about Kony? First to introduce about him, he is the boss of LRA, which stands for, Lord's Resistance Army. He's a man who makes children to kill their parents and orders them to be a child-sex slaves and child soldiers. 66,000 children became soldiers and two million people have been displaced in 1986. What do you feel? Don't you feel angry? Now, I'm going to write about my opinion of making criminal famous is right things to do.

   To start with, do you think making criminal famous is a good idea? Well... I do. That's because making criminal famous helps to gather the people to catch them. A large majority versus criminal are way profitable than few people versus criminal. One guy used 'you tube' to make Kony more popular for other people. Also, our classmate knew about Kony by 'you tube.' If he did not spread this awful news to the world, then Kony would keep killing young people even though they did not make any mistake. Also as I mentioned before, he kept ordering those children to kill their parents! It was really shoking! How sad children's feeling might be... Let’s pretend our self to be those children. I would be scared and nervous. Also, I would miss my family a lot. We should stop him.

   But some people disagree on making criminals famous. That's because sometimes it could make criminals into depth. If many people know them, they would keep saying bad words to the criminals and the internet might be very noisy of that news. Also, some people would try to catch those criminals.
    
썸네일   To add with, some people can hurt criminals with no thinking. They can even kill them very cruelly. Someone who disagree with these might think that killing is not so good idea. They might be concerned about it.

   But I'm different with them. Criminals such as Kony 2012 would be able to do bad things. For instance, killing or robbing money from the bank. They might kill many people. But why do we have to think and cure for them?

   Anyway, this method is a very good idea to destroy Kony's plan, So, in my conclusion, I agree with this video. In the other words, making criminal famous is right things to do.  And making criminals famous is a good way to arrest the prisoner, because we can gather lots of people. Also, some people try to capture criminals. Sometimes, they even do demonstrate. Even though they know its dangerous, they really try to help invisible children. Let's try to help them! Let's try to arrest them together and give those children a hope and dream as a same people."Fighting!!"

2 comments:

  1. I like your essay's structure, your main arguments, your conclusion. Basically everything is great.

    I'd like to mention a point that I strongly disagree.
    Kony is surely a cruel man. The evil things he has done cannot be forgiven whatsoever. However, Kony is still a human being. His life should be valued and respected. Killing him in the cruelest way might be an option. But it would be no more different from how Kony had treated the children he had kidnapped. If you don't like Kony, you should be someone who is very unlike Kony. In that sense, executing a criminal in a violent way wouldn't be the best option to take.

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  2. The essay is very well written. You support your points with the video and pictures. Keep up the good work.

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