Kony 2012
Have you ever heard about Kony? First to introduce about him, he is the boss of LRA, which stands for, Lord's Resistance Army. He's a man who makes
children to kill their parents and orders them to be a child-sex slaves and
child soldiers. 66,000 children became soldiers and two million people have
been displaced in 1986. What do you feel? Don't you feel angry? Now, I'm going
to write about my opinion of making criminal famous is right things to do.
To start with, do you think making criminal famous is a good idea? Well...
I do. That's because making criminal famous helps to gather the people to catch
them. A large majority versus criminal are way profitable than few people
versus criminal. One guy used 'you tube' to make Kony more popular for other people.
Also, our classmate knew about Kony by 'you tube.' If he did not spread this
awful news to the world, then Kony would keep killing young people even though
they did not make any mistake. Also as I mentioned before, he kept ordering
those children to kill their parents! It was really shoking! How sad children's
feeling might be... Let’s pretend our self to be those children. I would be
scared and nervous. Also, I would miss my family a lot. We should stop him.
But some people disagree on making criminals famous. That's because
sometimes it could make criminals into depth. If many people know them, they
would keep saying bad words to the criminals and the internet might be very
noisy of that news. Also, some people would try to catch those criminals.
To add with, some people can hurt criminals with no thinking. They can
even kill them very cruelly. Someone who disagree with these might think that
killing is not so good idea. They might be concerned about it.
But I'm different with them. Criminals such as Kony 2012 would be able to
do bad things. For instance, killing or robbing money from the bank. They might
kill many people. But why do we have to think and cure for them?
Anyway, this method is a very good idea to destroy Kony's plan, So, in my
conclusion, I agree with this video. In the other words, making criminal famous
is right things to do. And making criminals famous is a good way to
arrest the prisoner, because we can gather lots of people. Also, some people
try to capture criminals. Sometimes, they even do demonstrate. Even though they
know its dangerous, they really try to help invisible children. Let's try
to help them! Let's try to arrest them together and give those children a
hope and dream as a same people."Fighting!!"
I like your essay's structure, your main arguments, your conclusion. Basically everything is great.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to mention a point that I strongly disagree.
Kony is surely a cruel man. The evil things he has done cannot be forgiven whatsoever. However, Kony is still a human being. His life should be valued and respected. Killing him in the cruelest way might be an option. But it would be no more different from how Kony had treated the children he had kidnapped. If you don't like Kony, you should be someone who is very unlike Kony. In that sense, executing a criminal in a violent way wouldn't be the best option to take.
The essay is very well written. You support your points with the video and pictures. Keep up the good work.
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