Have you ever thought about three things you know to be true? I haven't but now I'm going to write about them, which is, traveling, jump-rope, and my puppy called, "Happy."
First, I like traveling. Most people like traveling. In modern times, many people started to travel abroad. I have some experience traveling outside of my country, Korea. I went to Guam, Thailand for several times, and Saipan. If I ride an airplane, my heart goes crazy. It starts to beat really fast! Even though we spend much time in airplane, I like traveling. Traveling is very exciting and fun! By traveling, we can even have new memories and experience. Also, we can know about other countries. It could be a good opportunity!
Second, jump rope makes me healthier. Lastly, people's height become very important. Lot's of women like men who are tall enough. Nowadays, people hope to be taller, so many of them do jumprope to grow taller. Also, I do it sometimes. Because we jump a lot if we do jumprope, it affects your play our health and height. As for height, I recommend you play basketball and do jumprope, but, as you know, basketball is hard to play. Expecially for girls like me. (In some cases, women can do it better than men) My future plan is to do jumprope a lot and become healthier.
Third, my favorite animal is a dog. I'm raising a puppy as our family's pet. His name is 'Happy' He is a very small and active puppy. Happy is my second pet in our family. My first pet was also puppy which was named, 'Doonge' Because I was so young, I haven't recognized the importance of family. Then I bred him roughly. So, still I feel very sorry to my first pet, 'Doonge.' This mistake gave me a lesson.
Now on, I am going to love my pet, " Happy" and treat him carefully. I would not repeat my mistake anymore! " I love you, Happy!" To introduce "Happy," he has very soft and white fur. To be truthful, I like him. Frankly, I like most of puppies. (Ofcourse I like "Happy" the most) Going for a walk with puppy makes me feel fresh and good. Also puppies even help me relieve stress! These are the reasons why I like puppy.
Wow!Awesome!
ReplyDeleteI didn't know about how did you grow up.
Nice blog!
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ReplyDeleteI love you're backround!! and I love traveling too! I feel like we're connected!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your blog. Try to add a brief sentence in your intro about what you will write about in the essay.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures you added makes the blog more interesting. Keep writing!
I like your essay very much. It's pretty well developed and also interesting. By reading this, every reader will know better about you than before. Though your introduction is a little bit short, you also organized your essay in a good way. Still, I want to point out that this essay has a few grammar mistakes; you didn't make your verbs correspond to the subjects. Try to remember that every single verb should me made correspond to its subject. Except for this minor mistake, the rest was very good!
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